Tuesday, June 1, 2010

The key

Authors note: This poem is about trust, and how when your trusted with something you must not give in. A key can have many different meanings and in this poem i tried to express them.

Secrets--
Opened, closed.
Revealing pathways
Drawn by its mystery.
Power--
Secured with a lock
Knowledge of where
The key-
The answer-
The Truth-
Shall remain a mystery.
Curiosity-
Controlling
Overpowering
Overshadowing
Trust is held within you,
To fight the temptation to look.
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4 comments:

  1. KatelynJune 3, 2010 at 10:15 AM

    This was a neat poem! I really enjoyed it. You may want to add a authors note though because I didn't know what your thought was when you wrote this which made the image more difficult to see.( I don't know if that made any sense) Good job though!
    ---Katelyn

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  2. CaitlinJune 4, 2010 at 9:32 AM

    OK thanks. SAorry I ment to right an Authors' note, but I posted this at the end of class and didn't have time.

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  3. Allison SamuelJune 4, 2010 at 9:54 AM

    This was really super duper amazing!!!!!! I loved every single part of it. The ending was really good where it said overpowering and overshadowing or whatever was really cool. The images I got were awesome; nice job!!!!!! :D

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  4. Alyssa MJune 4, 2010 at 10:13 AM

    This poem was really cool! I really liked the layout you used with the dashes and such. (and such :) The end was really dramatic and it was just overall really great. Good job!!!

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