Wednesday, February 3, 2010

Poem-

4 comments:

  1. Wow! That was really cool. Next time do something creative with it and a picture for example. Great job!

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  2. That was really good, and the picture fit really well with the text. I did notice that you spelt soars, sores, so next time maybe go through and revise one more time, but other than that, great job. :)

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  3. Other than the sores thing, i relly like it. i love how the pic fits the poem and thats it's uplifting and bright.

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